All right, English teachers, copy editors, lovers of the language and fellow grammarians, this song’s for you!
Every so often on the podcast I used to run, Living Blindfully, I would ask people to tell me about their grammatical pet peeves. It was a fun conversation. I was pleased to note that many shared my frustration about how many people are using passive voice these days. It seems to me that it’s a major problem in the software industry, but perhaps it feels that way to me because I am hanging out in that arena a lot.
So rather than just whine about it, I thought I would produce a song about using active voice rather than passive voice, a song that teaches the difference and why it matters.
I got the inspiration for this song from all the great old tunes I used to hear on Sesame Street as a kid that taught me all kinds of things, and from the Village People, who I always thought of as the public service announcement band.
So, you are welcome to take a trip back with me to the 70s. You can dance to this one, and if you’re a teacher or you in any way try to encourage people to write well, I would be honored if you’d use it as a fun way to teach the lesson.
Now, in the 70s, it was very common to have an album version, which was longer, and a single version, which was shorter. I tried to imagine what it would be like if the Village People performed this live, so you should definitely consider this the album version.
Hope you enjoy it, and if it helps just one person to switch away from passive voice in their writing, well then, it’s been worth it.
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